Feedback from the showing

CONGRATULATIONS on a very successful showing!
Everyone was all smiles as we finished up our nearly fifteen minute showing. We've got some work to do, but it was clear that we are on our way to a focused piece.
Here's what people had to say:
-start performing the work every time we run it
-strong opening image, stretch it out
-work on continuing power through the transitions
-no "slappy girl running"
-lots of unison, make sure it is synched and clean
-walking/ running: don't think about where you have to be, but HOW you are going to get there
-clarify intent and work on facial expressions

Also, people really seemed to like the way the stats part came off with me just talking us through it. We may try to keep it this way for now and add in a few more stats that aren't quite as heavy, but still related to try and lighten that part up. Please let me know if you have any suggestions.
We have some parts to edit, some parts to clean, music to write, costumes to fit..... but I think we should feel secure that we have a stand out piece that will be both provocative and entertaining.

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TEAM!